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If only I could read your mind
If only I could interpret you emotions
Understand what you're going through
See through your eyes
Hear through your ears
Feel through your heart
If only I knew how to help you

But I can't
And I don't
And it's killing me
So what do I do?
Tell me.
Just... wrote this on a whim... literally took me 30 seconds to come up with and write... taking longer just to post it... I hope it's self-explanatory, if not feel free to ask...
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Aqua-Breeze Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww!
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Writer
good awww? bad awww? *tilts head*
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Aqua-Breeze Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww as in good poem but feel bad for you, assuming you were talking about yourself
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Writer
yeah, I was, been trying to help someone, but they're not much lettin' me.
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Aqua-Breeze Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That sucks. Been there many a times. Just give them time, and show that you'll be there to support them.
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Writer
*nods* thanks.
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Aqua-Breeze Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Np
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Ryskills Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome, I really like this!
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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Ryskills Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No need to thank me, but you are welcome!
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ChristineAnne25 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If only I knew ... :cries:
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
*nods* :/
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Icy-Dew Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
this is so deep and emotional , i love it .:dalove:
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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Icy-Dew Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
you are welcome.
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frei76 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
oh damn, it's so painful and sad ... when you don't know how to help someone you love ... :heart:
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
it is :/
<3
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LalitaRadha Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This.. is almost exactly what I wanted to tell my best friend today, and reading this, kind of made me feel batter, to know someone thinks the same way about some other situation that they're going through. :) Soo, thanks for writing! ^^
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you for understanding :)
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LalitaRadha Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem, hon! ^^
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SpikyEaredPichu96 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I've felt like this so many times that I've lost count... It's almost like a physical pain sometimes, isn't it? Or is that part just me? I just wish I could learn to give some people their space when they need it; it's harder to do so for some than for others...
Well anyway, absolutely lovely poem/lyrics/whatever you want to call it. :)
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah, I konw what you mean, pain in your gut, sometimes your heart, want to throw up but can't... it's terrible when you're worried about someone....
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SpikyEaredPichu96 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yes, exactly... I guess one just has to try and remember that things will work out in the end. :hug:
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
Exactly. I say that a lot. :)
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stealthyninja21 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student General Artist
I like it. Short, and pretty much describes what we've all felt at one point or another
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
thanks.
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topec Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This person you wrote it thinking about is so lucky...
I hope they know how much they mean to you...
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks... I've been trying to tell them..
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topec Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well sometimes no matter how much you tell someone they can't see it for themselves, but if you stick around you can always show them...
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
yeah, I agree
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Baumarius Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ha! I wish someone would say that to me..
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
sowwy
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BleachingLiliesBlack Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:''/
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kakekills Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012   Artist
it is completely relatable and self explanatory
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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kakekills Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012   Artist
ur welcome
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist
its very nice, and many times ive said something very similar
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks. And yeah, I just care y'know? Want to do something and it really hurts seeing them in pain and not being able to.
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist
Understandable, and the one of the worst feelings ever in my experience. To want to help, but be helpless. All you can really do is let them know your there. Even if its hammered into their head. Then wait. which is the worst.
Good luck.
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
haha yeah you sound a lot like me. I keep telling them over and over I'm here for them... but yeah, waiting sucks. That pit in your stomach, sometimes a lump in your throat, restless and uneasy, just waiting to hear from them so you can make an attempt... *shrug*
thanks.
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chaosemmy Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's real deep, I love it! :iconiwantitplz:
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
xD thank you :)
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chaosemmy Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your so welcome! :iconimanimeplz:
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