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When with one hand
We hold each other's head
And with the other
We pull each other close
When our soft lips lock
Under passionately closed eyes
We embrace

It's that moment
That the world doesn't matter
Our worries, nonexistent
And all there is
is each other.
Please tell me if this needs a strict content warning... I don't think it does, it's just a kiss, but if a few people think it does I'll change it.
It's just a short poem I kinda typed on my phone half asleep at 1am last night... I don't know if it's any good, but that's why I'm posting it on here.
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MyLife-YourDeath Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, this is cute. So many don't understand what this is like though...Anyway, no, it doesn't need a strict content warning.
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks. :)
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MyLife-YourDeath Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem. ^^
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Emry07 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
it brings back memories to me :')
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
I'm glad :)
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GoldenGirl954 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Aww this is so romantic :aww:
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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BleachingLiliesBlack Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!!
;)
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks (:
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DessertsAreStressed Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
Aww, that's so cute! I love it, great job!
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!
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DessertsAreStressed Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome!
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frei76 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
oh no, this poem does not need a strict content warning,
indeed your beautiful words should be read by most of the men I've met in my life,
to make it clear to them what the tenderness is... :cuddle:
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
haha thanks (: I'm glad you like it (:
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frei76 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
you're always welcome :blowkiss:
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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irrenderNarr42 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
sweet, but i guess you ment "with" instead of "whit";)
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
oh... yep... thanks
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irrenderNarr42 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
np^^
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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irrenderNarr42 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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