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Shining bright the stars look down
City lights in the distance
Nature's beauty up close
A cool night with a warm breeze
Brushing us as we kiss.
Your head on my shoulder
A beautiful face in the moonlight

Long our journey has been
And longer it will be
But through thick and thin
We both are there
To come back together
On this night

We've aged and we've grown
Since we first came together
We've loved and we've fought
We've struggled and we've glided
But after all this time
We find ourselves together again
Where some may grow apart
We seem to grow closer

A bumpy road
Of mixed emotions and feelings
For one another and for others
Lays behind us
And in the end
The friendship is only stronger
A tighter bond
A better romance

The future may be unclear
The past may haunt us here and there
But I am here
For you
And I'm making the best of our time together
Are you too?
Just typed this up, kinda came to me as I wrote it, that first line is all I had to start with.
I just got back together with my ex today. :)
Hope everyone likes.
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irrenderNarr42 Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is good, and it's good that you two are together again:)
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AutumnNight714 Jun 12, 2012  Student Writer
:) thanks
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irrenderNarr42 Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
np;)
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debidebdebdeb Jun 11, 2012
I don't know how you do it. Really. I am amazed. You have an ego, but you are also very humble. If everyone here had any idea how much of the literature category here is yours, they would be blown away. I crave the day you come out of the closet and claim all your work. Not only that, the volume,and speed that you can put high quality stuff out.
I am very,very proud of you.And it's not just the Literature. You do everything. And do it well.If it was all under your name..............I would like to interview you, to do your coming out interview.
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AutumnNight714 Jun 11, 2012  Student Writer
Wow, thank you so, so much. Honestly I do not think I have much of an ego, if you read some of my other non love related poetry I used to really HATE myself, but i'm working on it (I didn't mean to come across harsh or anything, I just try not to have an ego and be full of myself). If I may, what do you mean by claiming my work and putting it under my name? It is all on this profile only and my name is on the profile... I am interested in becoming a well known author but more for my novels and fiction/fantasy book ideas. Poetry is more of a hobbie, but if you believe I can actually get some of these flukes published, please say more! :)
I really can't thank you enough for being so kind. Um, in case you hadn't seen on my profile, I am only fifteen, so I don't know about "coming out" or being well known, yet, but uhh... I don't know. I'm just shy.
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debidebdebdeb Jun 11, 2012
you will be there for me tonight?
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AutumnNight714 Jun 11, 2012  Student Writer
umm, well I don't really know you, but if you read the description on my "There For You" poem, yeah I'm here if anyone needs to talk or needs help with stuff going on... this poem was directed more for my girlfriend but sureeeee >_>
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