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I Still Love You (revised)

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I'm sorry I'm not perfect
I'm sorry I can only try
But it hurts when you get angry
And you don't explain why

You look at me in tears
N' sometimes you almost shout
The frustration you bring upon me
N' the anger you bring out

I'm mad because I care
I want nothing more than to see you smile
I just want to help
And believe me
I'll be here a while

When you cry
My eyes tear at the seams
When you're sad
Rain clouds haunt my dreams

But when you laugh or smile
My lips curl up too
You still make me so happy
I only wish I could express
How much I love you.

We all make mistakes
We all do things we don't mean
And I forgave you before it even happened
I'm not as upset as I may seem

We've had good times
And we've had bad
But no matter what
Being your friend will always keep me glad

We both have other friends
Who I care about too
But you're the only one through the phone
To whom I want to hang up and whisper
I still love you.
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the origional

I wrote that yesterday and did the editing in school today, I had about a half hour at the end of biology so I decided to see what I could write from memory and edit it.
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notaweirdo16's avatar
This is really awesome! I love the way it flows. Nice job.