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I walked alone
On a path followed by few
Gently warmed
By the high risen sun
The sounds of nature soft
Little did they touch my ears
And into my thoughts
Where I remembered her face
Her smile
Bright as the day
Gentle as the breeze

I came to a clearing
Not far from the path lay a field
Low cut grass
A river flow just beyond
It was wide and calm
And in the middle sat but two trees
All alone
Away from the rest

Unlike the forest around
The trees had color
Had beauty
Hugging with branches intertwined
Orange and red leaves kissing
The two trees together
Apart from the rest.
Not my best poem... It kinda came to me a few weeks ago, but just now I decided to transfer it from a sticky note on my phone to my laptop.
I was just taken by this sight. I felt like one of those trees. I'm so different from anyone else, my friend and I, we just stand out. I more so than her. I have very few friends, and I don't really fit in anywhere, but, I take pride in being me. I'm not going to try to be someone I'm not just to fit in.
I hope it makes some sort of sense to people...
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:iconbleachingliliesblack:
BleachingLiliesBlack Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
😊
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Writer
square?
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BleachingLiliesBlack Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
derp.
Sorry, it's a :)
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LostInAPhotograph Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
This is cute, and it makes sense. :)
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Writer
why thank you :) Glad it makes sense.
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DevonEaton Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not your best, but better than most! I'm not a big fan of unrhymed poetry because it always feel a little lacking in rhythm, but this is definitely an exception.
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
I agree... not my best... haha, whatever though
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irrenderNarr42 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
before you can be yourself, you have to recognize yourself.
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frei76 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012
I :heart: it! :love: :clap:
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AutumnNight714 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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